It was really awesome, reading it we get back to the real and happy part of our pasts. It would be worth writing about the real incidents of life like this one. But it's your choice to also write fiction stories. Why not to try?.... Just 1 thing to notice.... Sometimes, there are some words and phrases that really don't match with the emotions of that line.... try some easier and mostly remembered phrases.
Felt exactly the same when I visited to collect my degree.
Awesome. I'm glad this turned out to be similar.
It was really awesome, reading it we get back to the real and happy part of our pasts. It would be worth writing about the real incidents of life like this one. But it's your choice to also write fiction stories. Why not to try?.... Just 1 thing to notice.... Sometimes, there are some words and phrases that really don't match with the emotions of that line.... try some easier and mostly remembered phrases.
Appreciate it. Thanks for the detailed feedback.